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Re: Outside Alone - Foris Solum
Most acrostic poems are creative and fun, while this one has some deeper meaning. It was refreshing. :) I really like what you wrote here, because I can quite identify ...
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Re: Nike - acrostic poem
I love that this is how you sum up yourself, in such a fun, creative way. :) Makes me want to write one myself. xD Wonderful job.
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Love (Unfortunately)
I don't have any critiques for this, because it's an acrostic, which I really don't know how to review, other than to say that I love them. :) The 'I ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Advertisements
This describes ads to a T. I love it. :) You mix in just enough truth and comedy into these poems. I love it. :)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Quiznos
These poems are all very clever and adorable. :) I really love how comedic it is. Woooonderful job. I love how you sum up just random subjects in these small ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Sponge Bob
Haha! This was humorous and adorable. :) I remembering writing these in, what, third grade. XD Looove it.
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Double Bass
This was written beautifully. I really don't have anything bad to say about it, the metaphors you used were great, your writing style was fabulous. Just wonderful job altogether. :)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Aftermath (Another poem my friend who died and I coauthored)
I'm deeply sorry about both your friends. As for the poem, there is nothing bad I can find to say about this poem. It was filled with such emotion that ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: End of a Dream
Hey there. :) I agree with the first reviewer- it was long and stretched out, and hard for me to continue reading. You'll get better at keeping the reader entertained ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Writing
Describes the feeling of writing to a Tee! :D Wonderful job. :)
May 11, 2011 -
Re: I hate you.
I really enjoyed reading this. :) The other reviewers have told you any nitpicks that I have, so, yeah. :) What I really like about this poem was the persistence ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Hmm... What could it possibly be? Oh yes, I'm new.
Hi! :) My names Kinzee, it's really nice to meet you! Everyone on YWS is super nice and wonderful writers. They give excellent writing tips, and it really is a ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Alright, so I'm ne here....
Hi! Welcome to YWS! It's really nice to meet you! :) On YWS, you can post your work, get awesome critique, as well as talk with other absomazing writers! :) ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: New and excited!!!
Hi! Welcome to YWS. Its a wonderful place to post your writing and get excellent tips from other awesome writers! :D What kind of stories or poems do you write? ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: HI
Hi, Jovie! :) I'm Kinzee, it's nice to meet you. :) What kind of stories or poems do you write? I write more fiction novels than poems or short stories. ...
May 11, 2011
