AdoxagraphyAngelus

Hey, Micki-More. :) So, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. You know I love all of your writing. I do have a few suggestions, though. One thing I'd like you ...

"What do ya think?" A young girl, with eager blue eyes and wavy blond hair, stared at one of her classmates impatiently. "It's... Good, Lisa," her classmate replied. The young ...

I really like the last three pictures- there really pretty. All the pictures are nice, though. :)

Scary and cannibalistic. Also, blonde. Haha! XD The scary part might be true. But, here's to quoting Willy Wonka... “Everything in this room is edible. Yes, I am edible but ...

Scrumptious.

So... I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet. XP But I did PM you about it, so, I guess that's okay... But since you already know my thoughts on ...

A/N: I don't usually write poetry, and I know nothing about the 'rules' of writing it, so excuse this piece. The only time I've ever read anything about poetry is ...

This was really well put together. The concept of living is dying and dying is living is very true. Kudos to you for a wonderful story.

I can't leave a long review, unfortunately, because I'm not on my laptop, and my dad's pestering me to get off. XP Anyways, that was lovely, as always, Bekah.The words ...

Dude... That was seriously haunting. It made me shiver. Seriously. It was crazy good. (This is quite an I'm-in-awe review. XP)

That was extremely sweet, and well written. :) Your angelic, soft hair, and your shimmering brown eyes. Your sweet voice, flowing in the air, was what made me realize; There's ...

This was fairly good. I can catch the emotion you were going for. I would suggest adding some commas, though, or else it sounds a bit choppy. So I can't ...

Prologue: The Dark Figure "Abduco!" the boy called, imitating what the man three feet away from him had done; nothing happened. The dark figure laughed humorlessly. "Of course not." The ...

Okay, my first thoughts on this story are: All together, fairly good. I rather enjoyed reading it, but where you cut it off left me wondering what happened to Lucy ...

That was really good. You really took such a simple topic and made it into so much more. When I saw the name, I thought it was going to be ...