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All I can say is wow. That was written really well. I don't usually like poetry that doesn't have capitalization but how could I not like this? You put such ...

Oh, wow, that was beautiful and tragic... I really don't have anything bad to say about it. It was really sad and just really well written.

I really liked this. :) [quote What is it? What is it, That calls out to us? This stanza doesn't really have a hook to it. It doesn't draw the ...

Welcome to YWS, Shamrock! YWS is awesome to get amazing writing tips and critiques. Everyone here is so nice and wonderful! I know you'll love it. :) Nice to meet ...

I'm not good at critiquing acrostics, buuut, I really like this. :) You described emotion well, and I really liked this piece. :)

This is sad and happy. I love it. :) I'm really sorry about your friend, by the way. Redemption Here I sit as your last breath has been taken. Gone ...

I adore these! :D The writers block one is PERFECT for how it is to have writers block! XP Awesome job on that. And on the inspiration one, zomg! Are ...

Wow. That was really good. :) Though there were a few small mistakes in there. Look Comma Ma, it's your grandson . . . Hold him tighter Comma momma. Watching ...

I'm not really sure what I think of this. It seems like it's all about getting drunk or high and doing some not so moral things while there drunks. Okay... ...

This was lovely and adorable. :) Though, some parts you told us instead of showing us. I'll go through here and show you which parts I'm talking about. :) Yes, ...

This made me cry. I don't know anyone with cancer personally, but, I pray for those who do. Its so horrible what those with and those around them have to ...

Though you know my opinion on these matters, I still really enjoyed this. :) No one deserves to be judged, your right. So, awesome job on that. Now onto nit-picks, ...

Even though I'm just reviewing this now... Go YWS. :D You wrote this awesomely.

I really enjoyed reading this. :) It has a lot of meaning to it and emotion under it all. Kudos to you for that. :)

All of your acrostic poems have some kind of deeper meaning. I love it. :) Kudos to you for writing some that are different than the others on here are. ...