Adnamarine

So, I'm trying to figure out my storyline, and I basically have it pretty much planned out, to a certain point, at least enough to get me started on writing ...

I can not brainstorm when I'm sitting in front of a computer with a blank page in front of me... usually. I have to pace around, or hunch over a ...

Some people use another name when the write a book in a different genre than their usual one, because they figure it would be a turnoff to fans of theirs ...

"Doing what you love is freedom; Loving what you do is happiness." Totally. I think you need to have a backup. My sister wants to be a writer and she's ...

*takes a long, deep breath* Wow . This was beautiful. It was very powerful, and sucked me in. For some reason, I normally avoid the longer poetry pieces, and I ...

Kitty, I changed the point of view this time, because this is a retelling of the story, and I realized that even though I hadn't meant anything by putting it ...

This was wonderful, loved it. A few things though. First, when you say 'I am desperate for your love' in the first two lines it makes it sounds as though ...

To give credit where credit is due, this is actually my sister's poem. But she needed a crit, so I told her I'd see what some other people thought of ...

Love your style, kitty, rythm was great, everything wonderful... The content was rather cynical, a bit strange, and definately not always true! If I just listen to the words themselves, ...

I'm not sure I exactly understood your review either. Did you or did you not understand what the poem was about? I couldn't tell from what you said. And if ...

I'd say wow, but everybody else seems to have that covered:) This was really sad, really powerful, really good. I was going to say maybe a bit more imagery and ...

Wow. That was... wow. It was very good, it definately portrayed the emotion you were going for if you were going for kind of dark. But it was good. I ...

Feet. One, two, three. Each one different, Encrusted with dirt, the skin is leather. He takes them with his hands, dips them in the basin, one by one, rubs the ...

I don't know if she's really similar to Regina Spektor (who I adore, by the way), but Imogen Heap is amazing.

Have I ever mentioned that you write amazing poetry? I don't really have anything to critique about this, so I suppose this isn't the most helpful, but I figure it's ...