Adnamarine

Oh, sorry. didn't know

[pre]You know what's funny, if you just say a word over and over and over and over and over and over again, any word sounds weird. Or if you see ...

I'd beat the hell out of the guy to get the gun and then continue to beat the hell out of the guy till he begs for mercy and tells ...

Thanks for all your help:)

First of all, can't wait to hear more! Just one thing that always drives me crazy is when parents call their son... son. Not that you have to change that, ...

SWEETNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow, I have to think about this... oh goodness. This brings in a whole lot of juicy new options... :D This will make everything in the plot so much ...

Much better. It's a good idea. I'll have to think about this some more... hmm... But I have a question. My guy isn't the most ethical person, I'm mean he ...

One thing you never EVER do is describe your character by having them look in a mirror!

I HATE making outlines. Since I am required to do them, though, I write the paper first, and then I make the outline based on the paper (instead of the ...

... I'm a little confused... sorry.

Every dog has its day

Hi! I like your concept of 'same old story.' But I think you need to make it longer, and put in more imagery. The last verse was very good. You ...

As I look into his eyes All I see are l ies then I look again and I see all the love we use d to have for one another... ...

Nope, no magic. But how's this for an idea? The person that he's supposed to get it for is actually part of the government, but he's secretly working against the ...

Well, just to let you know, there aren't exactly photos and things like that in the world my story takes place in. It's kind of made up, but it's pretty ...