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9/10 Gotta love Indiana Jones! signature is so boring:)

The phrase 'I hate my new school' jumped out at me as an extremely modern-sounding line in a poem that was anything but. It didn't fit. In fact that whole ...

Don't worry, I'm not in the habit of eating people:) I prefer cookies. The words of the Bible were written down by humans, but God inspired them with the exact ...

Hahahaha! Pat is winning! *sniffs* I love you Pat! *breaks down* :)

*bounces up and down* Can't wait! I want it now :cry:

With all due respect, Stella, how can you say you're a Christian and not believe every word the Bible says? If you believe any of it, you have to believe ...

I would never, ever do it. Not only could I not stand to have to spend the rest of my life wondering whether I made the wrong decision and they ...

Hey yoyo! This was altogether good, simple, clear, and compelling; good emotion. Your rythm and capitalization are spot on. For punctuation, I'd make the changes Sometimes said. However... :) The ...

My mother is downstairs, Her hesitant fingers asking The concertina to sing In the dimly lit kitchen.

It's okay Ginger, I don't understand it either. At all. It has good rythm and flow... it just doesn't make any sense to me. Sorry I don't have time for ...

adna saunters in, trying to look all casual, then, when nobody's looking breaks into a crazy dance and then jumps up and down and shouts "It's back!" Everyone stares over ...

9/10 *gets all excited* ooh, I have cookies! Will you critique for cookies?

Cinnamon. That was what I smelled when I entered the shop. Spicy and exotic, the scent always took me back to my childhood. My father was a merchant in the ...

*cowers slightly at the sight of all those colored names of the prestigious YWS-ers who all know you so well, takes a deep breath, and posts just the same* *sighs ...

I actually like the first one better, but the fact that I like either is almost surprising to me, because normally I can't stand anything as short as your first ...