Adnamarine

Not bad at all. Normally I don't like couplets, but in this case it added a kind of frantic rhythm that added to the tense emotion. That was very good. ...

This was pretty good, I liked it okay. It had good emotion, good rhyme scheme and rhythm. All I have are just picky things. First you say 'some things', and ...

Silly, but well-done. Short poems aren't exactly my cup of tea, but for what these were, they were good.

Sweet, I'm in

There's something about the way they talk about books in those books that's so... I just love it. It took me forever to come around to reading Inkheart. I kept ...

Garth Nix is brilliant. And Australian to boot. What is it about Australian's? Juliet Marillier is Australian too! I've read the first two of the Abhorsen Trilogy (I think I ...

Robin McKinley is one of my favorite authors in the world. I loved this book.

Used You always knew that I was a liar. You knew that I was aiming higher. You were never the object of my desire. You always knew that I was ...

I think you come to the conclusion too abruptly. You need more substance between the 2nd and 3rd stanzas. More metaphors, similes, etc. I think. I think the biggest problem ...

Sucky? Not in the least! The last thing I'd call myself is a poetry expert, but even I can see that it's brilliant! I'd never actually read anything of yours ...

Granted but something goes wrong when you're trying to change so now you're half eagle, half person. I wish that I could think of a wish to put down.

Molly ;)

The wealthy owner of a fancy Italian restaurant; short and dark as your typical Italian, and a large family. Briony Swift

...Mommy, help me!" and his mom...

What can't you choose?