Adnamarine

This has to be one of the best things I've read on YWS for a while, seriously! I am a musician, and I loved how you used the musical terms. ...

hehe, good job:) for both the poem and the napkin:)

These are some of my favorite books in the world. They're amazing. The plots are so complex and unpredictable and unique and clever. The setting is interesting and unique. The ...

These books are brilliant! Bartimaeus is one of my favorite characters of all time! The third was definitely my favorite. In fact, I think that the book got progressively better. ...

Definately a great book. Interesting and humorous at times. I remember before I read it a long time ago, we were going on a long trip in the car and ...

Awesome. Totally and utterly awesome. I think that's all there is to say.

Mostly I love all her books... except Rose Daughter was just STRANGE! How come you don't have Spindle's End on the list? That is a fantastic book by her. Deerskin ...

I think a bit more description could do some good. I like the rhythm. It's somehow unique, although "The world is watching you, but they will not help. They hate ...

Wow . This was really strong, beautiful imagery, really powerful. It was brilliantly bittersweet. The form, rythm, all the grammatical stuff like that was spot on, everything peachy. This was ...

This was a very sweet poem. I loved your picture with the star. I've only little things to suggest. First, I don't think that I would capitalize every line like ...

You deserve another star, so here's my contribution to the pile: Good luck! *adna*

I just edited this a lot. Better think you?

I know this is really, REALLY long, but I hope it helps!!! As I sat on the edge of my window, staring outside, watching the day pass me by. I ...

The pushed together words were intentional... I have to admit, I didn't really know where I was going with this myself. I suppose I'd better work on that...

I've had that exact feeling. I post something here and people make a few comments and I look back and realize it was horrible. NOT that this was horrible! Just ...