Adnamarine

Ahoy Saint! You're just completey awesome, aren't you? :D I love Arizona. I've only been there once in my life and I fell in love. I wasn't anywhere near Flagstaff ...

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Just to let you know, I don't think all caps is allowed in the subject. I could be wrong, it might be different since you only did it with one ...

I think that they need to lower the drinking age, and raise the driving age. You should be able to drink before you're able to drive. When teens are first ...

Through million doors Make this 'through a million doors' or 'through millions of doors' I felt my hand touch yours. Beyond grand mountains and cold lakes , a s fast ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! Aww, don't run down your writing! We'll love helping you improve, though:) Rain lover *grins appreciatively* I like rain:) Cool name:) See you around! *adna*

Hey there Ash! (mind? kind of took a fancy to it:) Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions feel free to PM, or when you have something posted you ...

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This was interesting and original. Mostly I'd just go over the punctuation and grammatical stuff. You misspelled 'deceive'. But I didn't really get it, I have to admit. Much as ...

Beneath the gate of shadows lives a man who was left with only the fires of Hell to warm him. This line is too long; it doesn't fit the rhythm ...