Adnamarine

Ouch. Where you paying any attention to basic grammar and punctuation when you wrote this? Sorry. anger, hate, shame, lies. all his loyalty he denies. The rhyming here is doing ...

Ah, a Tolkien fan! You should be right at home here then... at least as long as I'm around:) What do you like to write? (I don't think it necessary ...

I need to take a break for a while. I've been spending far too much time here, without really accomplishing any good here, I haven't been reviewing much. I'm just ...

Banned for accidentally skipping Monki (sorry Monki)

Banned for being older than me

Hey! Welcome to YWS!!!! So you know Ashlyn already, huh? That's pretty cool:) I didn't know anybody when I came to this site... at least, not in person. So what ...

Hey Rika! Nice to see another new face on YWS! I look forward to reading your stuff. If you ever want a crit let me know! And if you ever ...

I have to say, having those extra words capitalized is distracting. And you have no punctuation in this; it desperately needs punctuation. You need more imagery in this. I like ...

BANNED: niteowl, for noticing before I did

I didn't get this poem at all... I didn't get what it was about, what the emotion was supposed to be, or anything. I can't say that I got anything ...

Banned for mentioning the police

Banned for being my age

Happy Easter Everybody!!!!! *happily munches chocolate and hums an Easter hymn*

Wow, I listen to absolutely everything:) But alternative, punk, hard rock, and indy are my pet favorites:) Anti-Flag MxPx Mike Doughty Mika My Chem Green Day Weezer Damien Rice Three ...

I've heard that it's really, really good, but I've never read it myself. Who's it by again?