Adnamarine

Is this all that I can do? To sit and wait for it to come, passive, lifeless, and inert? Is that all that I can do? All that I can ...

Heyo there:P So very glad you returned to us. Of course, who could resist? So have fun, and if you ever want a crit, definitely let me know! *adna*

How are you so damn brilliant? This is like poetry heaven! I've never read anything like what you write before. You're writing a poem every day, posting them mostly unedited ...

We're friends . We talk, We laugh. You touch me lightly on the arm, I wonder what this means. You changed tenses Your smile is enough to make my heart ...

And many came to glimpse the fall and the horror spread through one and all their eyes were covered so they'd not see the pain that visited them that day ...

I think you need to expand on this. I definitely agree. Your take on the subject matter is unique, but you should make it longer. I'd expand on the description ...

Revenge awaits us all someday, r evenge can pass the time away . The first two lines seem rather unrelated. Sneaking, plotting s cheming, stalling, f or the most wonderful ...

Yay for family! Welcome aboard Silv:) With a such a glowing recomendation from Cade, you're sure to do lovely here:D See you around! *adna*

Shivers run down even in that warm place, her red-tipped fingers poised on the surface of the paper. Pen in hand, eyes closed, she murmurs, "Pen in hand, eyes closed, ...

PARIS?!?!?! *jealous* Well, I'm going to Myrtle Beach... :| Okay, so it's not Paris, but I'll get to see my niece:) I'll be gone for a week from tomorrow, so ...

Well, now you can say that you know me:) So, let me be first to say, Welcome to YWS!!!! Everybody here is really friendly, so no doubt you'll know everybody ...

Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome to YWS!!! This is the perfect forum for writers, as you can see, and I'm very glad you found us! Check out the rules and the FAQ before ...

Ooh, I love the Japanese culture too:) Have you ever seen the movie The Last Samurai? It was really good:) So, Welcome to YWS, where absolutely fantastical things happen to ...

Yeah, I could kind of tell that it was difficult for you not to rhyme. But it didn't effect the quality of the poem at all:) The wind dies down ...

Oh, I like this very much:) I have to say, I agree with Matt Bellamy about her favorite stanza:) I'm not sure why... *shrugs* I almost think it wouldn't hurt ...