Adnamarine

Very clever:) I especially like these lines: "Suddenly, a black-eyed Susan appears from the back The gaze of a birch catches her eye, and she flutters off, But not before ...

If we could give it ten stars, it would deserve it. Is it possible to overuse the word awesome? I'd sooooo overuse it on you! Loves:) *adna*

Adna wakes up, still sitting at the same table she plopped down at the night before, and realizes she has a splitting headache. Hangover. Whatever. Goes to the bar and ...

That is adorable:) I love it! Meese... now I'll be calling mooses meese for the rest of my days:) lol Eah, who cares about iambic pentimeter? This is great! *stars* ...

"The paper burns, but the words fly away." -Akiba Ben Joseph Like a white pidgeon it flutters down, unsuspecting, to his hands. A sigh it utters, hanging open like a ...

A cloud of sickness , spread far and thin— The result of man ambition to build, and master . I suppose you could leave the exclamation point there, but personally, ...

Thanks everybody:) Pengu - I love the long review! It was great! Did you figure out who 'they' were by the end? I just want to make sure it's clear ...

Hi Lexie and WriterAddict! Welcome to YWS! Oh, Addict? Try not to use chatspeak here. We are writers, after all. 1476 pages?! Wow that's a lot! Is that 1476 poems? ...

Fly on the wings of an angel, come sit at my feet, as you sing on, your melody so sweet. Every note you sing here casts its spell , for ...

Scared to talk to you? It is you who should be scared to talk to us! *aside to the rest* the impertinance of this newbie... I'm just kidding:) Everybody here ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! It's so lovely having new people here. If you need help, which you said you would, I'm just a PM away. You can come to me ...

Yay! Another new member! *mutters to self, 'another newbie to pick on.' Laughs maniacally* Just kidding. I would never do that. And everybody here is really nice, so you won't ...

Haha, at first I thought Heather said it's awful:P So HI! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure that with two sisters on here already you have all the advice about this ...

As niteowl said, short and sweet:) It's very effective, no useless fluff in there. I wonder if there's room to make it longer, though? Just a thought. Nothing wrong with ...

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