Adnamarine

I'm very sorry if this sounds unduly harsh, but I can just about sum up this poem in one word: cliche. Everything you say here I feel like I've heard ...

*huggles new member* Hiya Cassie! Looks like people have the important stuff covered mostly... Ooohh, by the way, once you have 25 reviews you can visit chat! Another neat place ...

I like the closed eye better, actually. It's so pale and peaceful looking. XD When I saw the other one (before you put up the "See No Evil" one) I ...

Hey yoyo:D

Hey, it's an official pole! Congrats Arris! (I already voted)

Quite humorous:) I love the little critter's total disdain and condescension for the person. It's interesting having it from 2'nd person POV. Definitely unique. Can't wait to see more:) Sorry ...

Hmm, I'm actually more accustomed to thinking of kiwi has an extraordinarily delicious fruit, Lay. *eyes the newbie hungrily* Unfortunately, I'm forbidden to eat new members. Rats. :D So, welcome ...

Sorry if this is too late. For someone who thinks they're so bad at poetry, this was quite good, nothing to be worried about, I don't think. "The melody, my ...

Chew it to bits? I shall do my best, but really I think you have quite a sound piece of work here. Your rhythm was almost perfect. Just a couple ...

Hey there:) Glad you found us. Never was of TYWC, so glad to meet you:)

Sadie She padded after this person—Eddy?—who’d helped her so strangely. He moved fast, lithe as a cat in the crowded, littered alleyways, though she had no difficulty keeping up. This ...

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but the rhyming scheme is all over the place I think that's one of your biggest problems with this. If I were you, I'd just make it: AABBCCDD etc. "The ...

Nate, you're a genius. Thanks for all the hard work you put into this site:)

Adna absentmindedly moves her head from side to side to the music, singing along quietly. Finally getting sick of it, she turns on Riot, by Three Days Grace, and starts ...