Adnamarine

Hey Jett!!!!!!!!!!!! So wicked awesome to see you here dear:) There's so much wonderful stuff here you're sure to enjoy. There are all kinds of forums where you can seek ...

Hi Kody!!!!!!!!! Welcome to YWS!!!!!!! Warning: there is a 99.9% rate of addiction in those who become members of this site. Seriously. :D If you like roleplay, and stories, and ...

Another penguin lover:) We have quite a few of those here, I think. Welcome aboard! Another poet! I write mostly poetry myself, but I've never tried lyrics. If you ever ...

Hello Dia:) Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's a crazy place, full of crazy people, but crazy awesome:) I'm the same way as you; I love to write poems, but I still ...

The first thing I noticed is that all your sentences have the same type of structure, especially in the very beginning. It gives it a rather bland feel. "That was ...

Lightheartedly Evil and cynical. That describes the first perfectly. It reminds me of how my sister describes old people, her tottering hags and all that... I didn't really find it ...

Hello there:) How are you finding you new home? Wonderful of course, why do I even ask? :D Is there anything I can help you with? Any questions you have?

Hello, hello! "Don't know why you say goodbye when I say hello..." Right, anyhoo. Welcome to YWS! I don't know exactly what it is you're looking for, but I do ...

Let's see if I can do this when I'm angry. It's not called venting. That I did. I lashed out at those around me furiously. Strangers, stay out of my ...

Hi Fran! Adnamarine here, but you can call me Adna. Everybody does. A mixture of romantic and fantasy fiction. Sounds like a perfect blend. That's one of my favorite things ...

Hi Fibbles! Go David C.! David A. was too... little... but last season was not nearly so good the season before, with Blake and Jordin. Anyway, welcome to YWS! I'm ...

Gutentag, Schem:) Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! It makes me totally hyper unless I was really tired, or I'm drinking it with a meal:D Thank goodness for caffeine, that's all I have to say. ...

You repeat "on." "float on chill wind" "Leaves rest on his grave" Should be very easy to fix. Apart from that... you're an awesome writer:) Good luck!

Heyllo Minerva, welcome! I agree with them, you do have good taste in books... er, that is, I haven't actually read Artemis Fowle or His Dark Materials, but the others ...

July awakens, born from the middle month in the balmy peace of summer midnight. Heat neither slackens nor increases, quivers like a moth around a light, waiting for the moment ...