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Hey Alice!!!! I hope you don't stay too confused about everything here. If there's anything I can help you with, let me know. I know I felt a little lost ...

'Ello there:) Is there anything specific confusing you? 'Lainna and Suz told you about the helpful stuff, and a lot of the great stuff we have here. As you can ...

Hello Sarah! I'm glad I get to be the first to say hello, and welcome. There are so many people just jumping at the chance to greet our newcomers:) I'm ...

HI Merry! Welcome to YWS!!! We're getting so many new users all the time, but we certainly wouldn't want you to feel that your arrival goes unnoticed, which it doesn't. ...

Honestly, I could not make head or tail of this. It sounded like a bunch of cobbled together words that happened to sound nice together. I couldn't understand what in ...

Hi Faithe!!!! Welcome to YWS;) I think Faithe would be very pretty as part of your pen name. I've always wanted to have a pen name, but I'm far too ...

Welcome to YWS Daisy!!!! By the way, said Nate is actually quite a real person, not virtual. He's the fantastic and revered admin of the site. I hope you're not ...

The topic of you poem is so cliche, so overdone, so stale that it's very difficult to make anything new and worthwhile out of it, and I'm afraid you didn't ...

Hi!! Welcome to YWS dear. You sound very, very excited:) And of course you should be. This is a fantastic place. How'd you find us anyway? I wouldn't make all ...

Hey Chelsey! My sister's an English major too, and she gets the teacher thing sometimes. She's thinking about being an English professor, just because there's no guarantee of consistent income ...

Welcome, welcome:) A really helpful section you can check out, as you said you would like some help, is the FAQ , which was written with new users like yourself ...

Hey there!!!!! Welcome to YWS!!!!! I've been here for a very long time, so it must be good, right? Of course right. I'm very excited to help you. You must ...

The first thing I noticed is that all your sentences have the same type of structure, at least in the very beginning. It gives it a somewhat bland feel. "That ...

Sachi-cat! Terrific job. First things first: *stars* That said, I'm normally not huge on haiku. I usually read them in bunches like this, but anyway they're all really good. Good ...

Hmmm, weird and funny... who does that remind me of? Oh right, everybody on the site. Of course:) You'll fit right in here dear, and trust me, you'll be here ...