Adnamarine

I love poems about poetry, and I liked this very much:) "The Poet ' s hand quivers- With thoughts on edge of pen , The world upon their shoulders- And ...

Um, I don't have much to say about this. It was alright, though it wasn't terribly original. I think it could benefit from a bit more imagery, if you know ...

Hi Charlie, how's it going? I think... this was pretty good, but it could use a bit of work. First of all, you need to have a rhythm. Right now ...

Hey Em! Welcome to YWS:) I see you already checked up on the rules and stuff. Good for you. Was it the FAQ you looked at? Well, another good place ...

(except that would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!) Granted but then they take over the world. I wish that I could go see the Dark Knight today.

Hiya Ryllie! If you were looking crazy people, you found them:) I'm pretty sure we're all certifiably insane;) And we're all addicts. YWS addicts, that is:D Welcome to the ranks. ...

All I have to say is, it's about time.

Granted, but it malfuctions and blows up, naturally with you inside it. Whoops. I wish that the sky was lime green.

Quite clever, and quite enjoyable:) Very lighthearted. "It's raining paper like snow today," We don't ordinarily say it's raining snow, do we? :)I'm not sure what would work the best ...

Welcome to YWS, first of all. Secondly, like OverEasy said, please do two reviews for each piece of your own you post. Now to your poem. Like Yatta said, it ...

Wow… just, wow! This is really, really great poetry. Longer poetry usually has a hard time holding me, but this was incredible. It was very unexpected and unique, very different.. ...

Summer storms are gorgeous:) I think you did a very good job of capturing some of that loveliness. The sky glowers. I like the words you used for your first ...

'Lo Yatta:) We've met, I think? Hi Parrish (cool name by the way)! We have a lot of people here who like vampires, I think. At least, I would certainly ...

Pat Buchanan and Bartemius FTW!! (come on guys, you gotta leave some stuff for the rest of us). And Nate. Obviously:) There should totally be an official poll about this.

I have to post two reviews per story/poem I post? Yup, that's right. You caught on fast:) And the 13 - 25 thing isn't a rule, it's just... oh, I ...