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Re: Hey!
I'm really glad you've joined officially. To be honest, I wasn't nervous when I first started posting my stuff. I should have been. :P No, I'm kidding. But I definitely ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Broken - Prologue
I actually feel kind of guilty about this. Why? Because I really can’t come up with anything to suggest, as far as changes. This is great. Well... alright, I do ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Sup
Ooooh, intimidating name! :P And yes, that is awesome. I've never been big on horror to be honest, BUT, with the hundreds of simply fan tasmic people here, you will ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Brick by Brick
The first thing I have to say is that I love the ending, the last about 7 lines. I don’t know if I interpreted them the way you meant, but ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: The Running Away Song
Wow, it’s been such a while since I last reviewed poetry. This will be very good for me, thank you. This was really sweet. There’s something really unique and special ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Walking in the dark
But seriously Andy, have some respect for the dead. I mean, come on! Poor Carmen, whoever she is. I actually loved her internal commentary during that stage of the conversation. ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Hey everyone!
Hey Dom :) Already discovered the Writer’s Corner and everything? I’m impressed. When I first got here it was quite a while before I looked around enough to find any ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: In This Heart Of Ours
I have one question. Is the first part (meaning before the asterisks) meant to be a prologue? If it’s not, it might be best if it were. The style of ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: the names fire..Icefire
Hey! Welcome to YWS :) You've jumped right in, haven't you? Awesome. If someone hasn't suggested this already, you might like to check out the FAQ for new users . ...
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Australia Quiz - in Chat Now!
I missed an Australia quiz?! But Aussie is my true love! *sobs*
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
*thinks she should have gotten the points so she in turn could donate them to freakforchrist*
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: First Lines in Literature Quiz Show [Over]
Wouldn't it be cool if we had a regular running of quizzes, like once a week, once a month, or something? I was soo disappointed to miss this quiz. I ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Konnichiwa! I'm EAHailstone, or will be when I am famous.
Hey there interesting person who is new to YWS and should be very happy to be here and thefore naturally is. :) I'm Adna... yeah. I think that's pretty cool ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Creatures of Shadow
I liked the beginning very much (the beginning being up the point where she dies, which isn’t technically the beginning, it’s more like the first half, but whatever:)). It was ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Peanut Butter Jelly Time
Hey Hannah :) That's the kind of puppy my sister just got! I'm pretty sure... he's at least part fox Terrier. awww, it's like Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs! ...
Nov 14, 2008
