Adnamarine

Back for more! :) I definitely like the changes you made, especially changing the verse endings to "you would be my only". It's good how you change the endearment from ...

Look past my depths. Look through me, To a darkness beyond, A blank wall. Succinct and Pertinent. Long-winded flames and Inspirational, enlightening light. Consistently inconsistent. I flare high and

The first thing I noticed is that this needs punctuation. You put in a comma here or there, and a period at the end of each stanza, but it needs ...

First tip: rhyming poetry is much more difficult to get published than free verse, or any other non-rhyming style. The reason is simple: rhyming is rarely done well. That’s partly ...

Poe, most definitely. T.S. Eliot-- you must read The Lovesong of Alfred J. Prufrock . Don't be daunted by its length. Samuel Menashe and Carl Sandburg are a couple favorites ...

Lately, I've realized more and more how often I'll hear a sentence, a phrase, maybe even just a word-- maybe an unusual one or used in an unusual context-- and ...

Now why would I hold you being a Brit against you? We've got quite the Brit crew here anyway; you'll be just fine. :P So the rules are covered, eh? ...

careful

A breath of fresh air, if not for its poetic style, for the blunt style, the irony, and the honesty. Not that I don't like its poetic style; it suits ...

Mr. Darcy doesn't watch me sleep. I'll take him. Ditto. Stalker!!! Mr. Darcy is actually mine... so you ladies can all back off. Pfft, in your dreams. He’s been mine ...

Hmm... I think you've exaggerated his looks a little bit. People keep talking about how accurate it is and our Jig will have himself a head to make that crown ...

Hey darlin! If you're too backed up, don't worry about this in any hurry, but care to look at a poem for me? No need to rush too terribly because ...

Jon! Care to review a piece for me? *snugs* Of course you would. :P Please? Many thanks in advance, and I'd love to return the favor! (just post in my ...

Demi darling, care to review a poem for me? It could potentially be entered, after much revision, to the Journal, if people like it. I'm terrible at judging the quality ...

Dearest darling Heather, I would LOVE one of your splendid reviews? For a poem: Please? xD Thanks. -Adna