Adnamarine

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!! To Kill a Mockingbird is certainly a quality classic. Haven't read it in a while. I should read it again. The other guys have covered the rules and such, ...

Oops, double post.

See them, there, in that open expance. It's actually "expanse." :) Most of what I have to suggest has to do with the rhythm. Something I always try to do, ...

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! Apparently you're more logical than I am. I never found this section when I first joined. Kudos for you. :P I see the rules are covered, so let me ...

It depends on whether you are using them in a list (you probably wouldn't be using 'but' in a list, but it does apply to 'and'), or to join two ...

There are way more literary publications that publish that type of thing than you think. I can't suggest a particular place, but I'd suggest getting a resource like The Young ...

Telling, and showing, as they're meant when you hear the SDT thing are seperate ways of relating the same thing. If you're using show instead of tell, it doesn't mean ...

And crisp 600 thread count sheets. It should be “thread-count”. I’m from the rusting sputters. (Out of a car going Putt, Putt in the frigid winter air.) The period should ...

Hey hon, what's up. Where shall we start? Let's start with your own admission: that this is sappy. If you know it's sappy, there are some really important questions you ...

Based on the title of the poem, I was pleasantly surprised. This wasn't at all what I expected. It's creative, and original. That said, let's move on to the important ...

If possible, please use the attatchment; that's the form I wanted the poem to be in. But I have it in the post just in case the attatchment doesn't work ...

This is one of those rare poems where I have practically no changes to recommend. And the ones I have amount to nothing, really. Oh, others might come along and ...

I think one of the first poems I fell in love with, one of the first I ever read, was Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan ...

I'm not going to go in depth here June. This is a very good piece; it's very accessible... probably because this is a writer's community. :P I just wanted to ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this, its fresh perspective and satiric tone. Now, I have to first agree with the comments June (springrain) made about those first three lines. Also, she ...