Adnamarine

I'm excited for EVERYTHING =)

Here we go. :D

pfft, NaPoWriMo so pwns Screnzy ;)

So who's excited for NaPoWriMo?! =)

I'm glad the ticker's coming back! I still remembered the blog sometimes, but it was a nice feature. As always, you're awesome Nate.

As requested :) Here are the changes I would make. Your words, they flare arguing, battling, [s]my thoughts[/s] m y thoughts are brave always awaiting freedom comma [s]My thoughts [/s] ...

Punctuation This is very rare for me, but I like this poem without punctuation. You managed very well to keep things clear without it, which I know can be difficult. ...

8/10 The quote is mediocre; the source is excellent.

Did she or didn't she steal my question?

Done!

Sorry it took me a couple days to get this up. Here you are: Punctuation Even in poetry, run-ons and fragments are unacceptable. Either you have punctuation in your, or ...

*hugs* Welcome back!!!

Done. Next?

Everyone else had wonderful advice for you, and I think they covered almost everything, grammar-wise. A few things I don't think anyone mentioned: I ran to you when I was ...

Hi! Such an original greeting, no? Your avatar is awesome. Somebody else had that... and I can't remember who! This is going to bother me... Death Cab for Cutie, the ...