Adnamarine

The desert lay calm, chilling under the moons angelic glow. “moon’s” Calm resonated around the grassy plain semi-colon, period, or dash Then the sky went dark. Animals around tensed, in ...

Partly done, Cogz. =) There will be a part two.

Here as requested Cogz! =D Since this is your first poem, I’m going to try to be especially thorough, but that doesn’t mean I’m picking on you. :P I’m glad ...

It's Chi's birthday! He said yes. It's only... 74 days until August. It's only a couple weeks until my sister's wedding. I'm done with high school foreeeeever in a week. ...

Can I have a bit of earth? It won’t forget the one who gave it Seeds to grow. Why won't she ask for riches? It will freeze and kill— dream ...

Hi Edward =) I see you're new to the site, so welcome. We do have a rule here, however, where we ask that you do two reviews before you post ...

First of all, please edit your poems before posting them. A single typo ("hrelp") is one thing, but you neglect to capitalize your 'i's four times. There were two sentences, ...

Hi Kamas! The burning sensation that scorched my insides with a wildfire The icy cold clarity of what my heart unfolded to my mind. First of all, this isn’t a ...

Who's next?! =)

Words can mean too much; words can hurt too much. Like a song on a summer breeze, words can and will touch. Whatever you decide, love, please, don't write to ...

Blues are so. totally. EPIC! *huggles* I'm so proud of you guys! I contributed a few, but again got busy this week D: But. Yay!

Alrighty, first of all, I feel like you took no advantage of the extra length. You continued thoughts and ideas that weren't that interesting in the first place, combining them ...

Hi, Jayandkay. The style and intensity of this story is undeniable. It's unique and vibrant. What it lacked was the ability to hold my attention beyond the first three sections. ...

Be who you are and say what you mean, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind. - Dr. Seuss The good writers touch life often. ...

hai Kate =) You don't mean "bear" with you, do you? ;) This is very creative, and for a light, silly piece, quite good. Even your rhyme scheme (and I'm ...