Adnamarine

Hi Shina! I have to admit, the length and style of the piece make it more difficult for me to review--I guess I'm just slightly out of my reviewing comfort ...

Interesting theme. Something like this deserves an intense, dramatic, very focused style. There are definitely places you have that... and places you don't. It's important to use specific language, to

Heeey Shaker-maker! =D Any particular nickname you want, or can I come up with one for you? :P I see most of the general rules have been covered, but all ...

Hello dear :) This is a nice little poem. =D What I want to know from you though is, do this mean something to you? Is this a subject you ...

Hi Expo =) This is lovely. Something about it, the tone, the wording, reminds me of butterflies, and pretty, delicate, golden fragile things; it just melts in your mouth and ...

Hiii! So here we go. My first review for you. One grammar nitpick I'll point out, in the second line: The wind cries it’s plea. It really should be "its". ...

I'm leaving for a bit, about a week. Be back Monday-ish.

Hello there =) This is an interesting little piece, and actually, I think it really has potential. The ending, especially, caught my attention. The ending is what makes this stand ...

You know, I think I like this? It's simple, it's short and sweet. Now, if you left it the same as it is now and tried to make it longer, ...

Martian! Darling! I see you got quite a number of review, and I'm sure some excellent ones (I notice our dear Demi reviewed you). Rather than go through all their ...

Hi! First, welcome to YWS! =) Stale, black reading glasses Lay vague upon the table

Another absolutely stellar piece. I don't feel so guilty about this review, since I can actually make some suggestions. =) As they lay her down "Lay" should be "laid". In ...

This was fantastic. Absolutely amazing. It was deep, but coherent. There was nothing ordinary, nothing cliche or trite about this piece. It was stunning. The only thing I have to ...

Hi Kat! First of all, it should be "lies" not "lays", in the title, and the other two times you use the word. Its steel made greater with rust, proving ...

Hi Shina! Okay first. Too many questions. True, they're mostly rhetorical questions, they don't leave the reader questioning, but that almost makes them all the more unnecessary. You could as ...