AdmiralTyler

It sounds a lot more interesting! This could work in webcomic format, as well, just as an aside. Good luck! Thanks! I would do a Web comic on this, only ...

Well, now that I read all of your thoughts, I've decided that I will continue forward with this idea, but make it a novella. Basically, the parents have gone on ...

Well then...I guess its back to the Drawing Board xD Don't think I took this as offensive, because I didn't. You basically described how boring of a story this could ...

... Yeah, but you're still ignoring the person's parents . They would suddenly be missing a son (if the teenagers didn't tell them about the game, this would look like ...

You don't need to bump topics to keep them alive! Resources is pretty slow, so you need a little bit of patience. :) It sounds kinda interesting? One thing to ...

This is the last bump I'll post. I promise.

My inspiration to write usually comes from something that usually interests me. For example, I got the ides to write a story based off of this comic I stumbled upon: ...

I like it and think it would turn out to be a really good prologue to a story. Good luck, with it of you do decide to go on with ...

Anyone else mind giving their thoughts in my idea? Just want some feedback, being a bit impatient but that's how I am sometimes.

Sounds interesting! Would the story be based on the baby? Would that baby retain the memories of the boy? If he does, that would remind me of this poem And ...

Um bump.... Please Don't hate me, I'm New

Sorry to be a bother, but just want some feedback on my idea for a story based on a comic I read. :( A couple of friends are over at ...