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Adeera

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Richard

    so this is a true story that happened to me and as you can tell I'm crushing hard haha Richard I went to the dance not knowing what to expect. ...

    Jul 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Girl With The Cheetah Mark

    wow i liked it a lot it really caught my attention and you described everything so well i could see it all !! one thing that really bothered me (it ...

    Jul 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Whispered Strength Chapter 2

    CHAPTER 2 when the horses where in the stable father and I walked across the training ground to the sound of a man shouting out the stroke patterns as the ...

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: With you =)

    oohh very nice i really liked it, it's very cute. the creative coloring really piqued my interest. i like how you had an actual girl write the first part and ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Real Me

    i think this was beautiful, and i felt like i can relate to it, i liked the line "no-one will get my hearts key" i think mostly the reason i ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Portraits

    hmm yeha i should probably describe that a little better huh? ok the pictures are MINE but i didn't have a tri-pod so my coz, i guess you could say, ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Art Finished Over the Past Year

    wow you are amazing!! if i sent you a description of an animal in my book would you draw it? if you say no it's honestly ok i was just ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Whispered Strength Prologue and Chapter 1

    ok so i did a lot of editing and i do think it looks better thank you big bunches!!!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Elle (Chapter 6)

    honey !! you honestly have to stop apologize for the freaking length!!! it's AMAZING!!!!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Warrior Within

    woah woah woah!!!!!! PLEASE tell me there is a second part!!!! chapter coming SOOOON GGAHHH i'm dying here!!!! but no seriously that was incredible!!! i have no complaint except that ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Do angels cry in heaven?

    Beautiful

    Jul 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Red Herrin'-Chapter 1

    ooh very nice, i'm usually not one for mysteries but i must admit you have me caught in a trap that i'm afraid will not release me till the next ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: They're all Killing Me...

    i really liked the feeling of sorrow i got from it, and i only have a few things to say against it. nearer the beginning and middle it felt like ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: From The Arms of Our Fathers

    sweet!! PM me when you get ANY of your stuff recorded!! great job!

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Princesses and Soldiers

    wow this is absolutely beautiful i epically loved the last verse!! great job!! seriously keep it up.

    Jul 15, 2010


Proud people breed sad sorrows for themselves.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights