Adeera

numbers 9 and 2 are absolutely BRILLIANT!! great job keep it up!!

yeah so this made me laugh it's very clever my only problems are the same ones little princess pointed out so i'm not gonna nitpick but honestly i'm not much ...

Amber I've had friends before I know that it's true but I've never had a friend like that a friend that's just like you. You're more like a sister than ...

aww thanks ! i really like the first one myself it really says a lot about my life and home. :) haha yeah i do actually model for my friends ...

oh i just saw one of your reviews and your link. hmmm, just a little nervous. but no I'm all for change if it makes me better. and I'm not ...

that's wonderful! i'm really grateful to you. and i'm not in a hurry so you just take as long as you need. thanks!!!

well you are welcome to do any that you want but I'm currently putting emphasis on my story "whispered strength" thank girl!!

ALTERNATE BEGINNINGS 2. “Second star to the right and straight on till morning!” the little kid on the stage shouted out his lines as if he was desperate for the ...

HIIIIII person with the cool avatar anyway i heard a rumor that you like reviewing stuffz and i was wondering could you review my stuffs and tear it to pieces ...

hello darlin' girl, it's the naive homeschooler haha ;) anyway do you think you could kinda sorta, maybe, i don't know REVIEW MY WORK!!! PLEASE!! goodness knows i need it ...

Very nice poem :!: I quite enjoyed reading this. The wording you had, the flow, the rhymes, they all just made this poem great :D I really hope to read ...

hmm i like it, makes you think.

oh my word that is sooo cute!!

well girlie here are my thoughts the firsts part was VERY confusing and i think i know why, i do this sometimes too i get really excited about the story ...

Thanks!