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Re: Concentrate on Ripples
hey nice work girl!! i really liked this line epically "concentrate on ripples never let them fade keep them growing yonder where stillness had once laid" very nice. it flows ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Wind
this is really good when i read it i felt like i was the wind or like i know what it whispers when it blows in my ear. yeah i ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Paralysed
ok so this was amazingly well done in my opinion. and by the way i was about that close to literally shaking the screen and yelling "FLEX THE STINKING REIGNS!!!!!" ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Bullets
that was good!!! nicely done!! it's just makes me sad though that she couldn't just whip out a claymore and blast them all *BOOM!!!*
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
hey !! i thought i would review again 'cause i read it over and so yeah anyway moving on!! it's really good much better than the first draft but the ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Bubbles
this is so adorable, i really like it. it all rhymes really well and it's very creative. just the way you said everything, i could feel the bubbles popping on ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: The Griffon
i liked it pretty well i felt like i was on a roller coaster but my only problem was mentioned above at first i was picturing a forest person in ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: My Home
i totally laughed at he sbud!! haha that was awesome!
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: My Home
some pictures of Idaho where i live
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: 'A Child Shall Lead Them,' Short Story
i like this a lot. i was so relieved when i found out she was dreaming haha but i really like the way you told it, i could picture everything. ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Pencil on white paper <3
just some drawings i did. oh and sorry for the bad quality, i lack a scanner. also i did not forget the mouths i just can't do them very well, ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Wondrous World
this is adorable!! really i loved it. but i must say it's was hard to read in the white. i understand that it's the 'pure angel' effect but i had ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Underneath My Skin
yeah so this pretty much broke my heart when i read it very nice job
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Im "Just"
why do I write this if i don't like to write poems, is that I only write poems when I am in my emotional stage where sadness reigns in me. ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Ballet shoes and Mirrors
just playing with a camera
Jul 26, 2010
