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Adeera

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Concentrate on Ripples

    hey nice work girl!! i really liked this line epically "concentrate on ripples never let them fade keep them growing yonder where stillness had once laid" very nice. it flows ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Wind

    this is really good when i read it i felt like i was the wind or like i know what it whispers when it blows in my ear. yeah i ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Paralysed

    ok so this was amazingly well done in my opinion. and by the way i was about that close to literally shaking the screen and yelling "FLEX THE STINKING REIGNS!!!!!" ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bullets

    that was good!!! nicely done!! it's just makes me sad though that she couldn't just whip out a claymore and blast them all *BOOM!!!*

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)

    hey !! i thought i would review again 'cause i read it over and so yeah anyway moving on!! it's really good much better than the first draft but the ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bubbles

    this is so adorable, i really like it. it all rhymes really well and it's very creative. just the way you said everything, i could feel the bubbles popping on ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Griffon

    i liked it pretty well i felt like i was on a roller coaster but my only problem was mentioned above at first i was picturing a forest person in ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Home

    i totally laughed at he sbud!! haha that was awesome!

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Home

    some pictures of Idaho where i live

    Jul 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 'A Child Shall Lead Them,' Short Story

    i like this a lot. i was so relieved when i found out she was dreaming haha but i really like the way you told it, i could picture everything. ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Pencil on white paper <3

    just some drawings i did. oh and sorry for the bad quality, i lack a scanner. also i did not forget the mouths i just can't do them very well, ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Wondrous World

    this is adorable!! really i loved it. but i must say it's was hard to read in the white. i understand that it's the 'pure angel' effect but i had ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Underneath My Skin

    yeah so this pretty much broke my heart when i read it very nice job

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Im "Just"

    why do I write this if i don't like to write poems, is that I only write poems when I am in my emotional stage where sadness reigns in me. ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Ballet shoes and Mirrors

    just playing with a camera

    Jul 26, 2010


"Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?"
— Albus Dumbledore