Adeera

oohhh ok so when i read this i couldn't decide if i did or didn't like the feeling of sadness and hopelessness it gave me i think i liked it ...

wow . . . this is excellent!! you really covered the scary and the fun aspect of growing up! nicely done! ~Adeera~

wow you wrote this when you were seven?!?! really nice job!!!

hmmm i like this one. i got a bit of a drifting feeling, almost like it was a lullaby. good job !!

ooh very nice, i find myself feeling like this a lot and i really love your word choices. when i read the last line it really just echoed in the ...

look's like you don't have a human # 1 yet , could you PM me the details of how this works and I'll work on the character. also remind me ...

HEY!!! welcome!!! if you have any questions let me know and if your need points my work is always open for reviews ;) have fun!!!

I Adeera do hereby pledge my unwavering allegiance to MasterMind and her awesome cow, so that i may survive the wrath brought upon the world when she is ruler of ...

you might find a different way of saying . . . It caresses the page I'm writing on you say it twice right after the other and it's a bit ...

Hello! sorry if this is harsh i honestly don't mean to be. "He didn’t notice a dim, luminous orb of blue light flare from the object. He was already fast ...

once again panda I marvel at your writing abilities!! wow, short sweet and to the point. very nice! thanks for telling me about it. if you ever need a review ...

yup this is definitely a keeper !! good job there area few places where it didn't flow as well as it could have but other than that i really like ...

OOoohhh i like this a lot! sheesh your really good at this anyway on to the review!! this is really good the flow is great and the words are put ...

i like this a lot . it's a very chilling piece, nicely done it flowed well it was easy to read and you really get a sense of the hard ...

once again very nice job I noticed one problem . . . "what is thought is cannot be read." is it suppose to say that?? I LOVE LOVE LOVE the ...