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Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 3)
HEY! sorry it took me so freaking long to read this but here i am!! anyway. so i only noticed a few problems that i could help with. 1: i ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
dude this is hilarious!! i love it!
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: You're Perfect
aww i really liked this! its sweet and it reads so easily that i found my self not even really reading it but more like it was reading it's self ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Tribute to someone I will never meet
Tribute to someone I will never meet October 24, 2010 When you purchase a new shirt it usually has sewn in the collar a tag which has instruction on how ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Towers
oooh wow very nice job here I liked it a lot. avery once in a while i owuld get a little confused about some bits but eventually i worked through ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: long road to my heart
hello I'm gonna review for ya' today. Blue = great how it is Red = didn't make sense try re- writing a little Green = extra super-duper liked this Orange ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: The New Begining
OOHH very nice i really like this you did a great job. haha funny tid bit of information it made me laugh when it said "it was Kyle" lol I'm ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Remember That Night?
I like this. it makes a person think . . . well it made me think . . . I really like the ending how you just kinda left that ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Halo And Me
Halo And Me. “Do you know what your goat did?” I adopted the look of an innocent sibling getting reprimanded by her big brother “Got hungry?” I replied meekly “It ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Pencil on white paper <3
hay thanks Abby i never really thought about coloring them in . . . hmm i'll try that. thanks ! ~Adeera
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Winter Fireworks
oh my word, that is so heart warming and cute. i got such a happy safe feeling from this poem, it's so sweet. it flowed really well and was easy ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Ferris wheel
beautiful job right here! you always have the most amazing poems. I really like this one. keep me posted! ~ Adeera
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Flowers I know you see them all the time
flowers and pretty things i found while camping
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: Amber
Thanks guys! I'm glad you like it
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 2)
hello again!! down to business! I'm gonna have some fun with color if ya' don't mind [color=#BF00BF]W00TN3SS!! [/color] "After a lengthy lecture by Shirley that it no one would pay ...
Aug 10, 2010
