Adeera

Dude! this is incredible!! i love it ! good job. and i can't wait to read your book when it's on the new york best seller list! keep writing!! ~Adeera

AAHHHH!! I LOVED IT!! good job buddy! well i must say that at first it was hard for me to understand how it was suppose to flow, but after i ...

oh goodness!! I'm freaking out! i love these!!! they are just over all AMAZING! and i really like the line from the first one "for bitter mistakes are blessings in ...

wow good job honey. as everybody else stated the line breaks could use a little work, but other then that i think it was incredible. it made me feel sufficiently ...

i just wanted to say that i am really impressed by the fact that you were able to take such a long line: "staring into a dirty concrete wall, she ...

first off i got this idea from a challenge a friend of mine gave me. 3 years ago i had played the part of Juliet in our local theaters production ...

how could you!! i was feeling nice and warm and then you went and wrote this so now i'm feeling cold! haha! just kidding. but no really you did a ...

this is Beautiful! and inescapably sad. therefor you did a really amazing job! i really don;t have anything to say besides that fact that i'm impressed and that i really ...

well i like this. but i have to admit at first i thought this was about a little girl in elementary school. so you might want to clear up WHERE ...

i was a little confused by what you were going at here but i eventually figured it out. i like the mystical feeling and the mystery that you wrote into ...

this was well written i liked how you said everything and you got the point across really well. as for a title i don;t think i can help you there. ...

Amen. good job!

ok so over all these are goo lyrics. but! if you want this to be about a bad relationship you need to make it a bit more clear. cause i ...

this is so cute!! its written from the heart i can tell and that makes it all the better. there is just one line that i felt was a bit ...

wow. for some reason i really liked this one. but i didn't really understand it. i really like the second stanza! it's beautiful! you do an amazing and flowing job. ...