Addie2600

:shock: Well, i have to say this was the sadness and sweetest story that I've read so far. I like how you portrayed Zack's cancer and emotion to Amanda. One ...

Chapter 1 The Encounter Marilira opened her eyes as she felt herself thump out. Aelaedil was not kind in pushing her back into the real world. The rush of life ...

Great story! You really described her emotions with just the right amount of description and didn't over do it. Just a few things i picked up: 1) But... he wouldn't ...

WOW!!! Very nice job in describing your character and a bit of what he's like. The poem at the beginning is a bit of a stretch. I think you should ...

Hello everyone! I am very new to this forum and i would appreciate any or all reviews. Check out my posts if you'd like to read my stories! Thanks!

She felt dizzy. Her eyesight was filled with complete blackness. Her body felt heavy. She was lying in a fetal position. The last thing she knew was stumbling in front ...