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Re: Make way for the Black Sheep!
Howdy! I'm new, too! I figured I'd better come say hello. My sister is Areida, I hate to say, but I like to use my sister's fame to my own ...
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Re: Hey! Not for horses. About me. Sort of.
Now THAT'S what I like to hear, Snoink! Well, I'd better be off to critique something. Perhaps one of your pieces. Hahahaha, Ari. Go eat a grain or something! I'm ...
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Re: Antithesis to Scopes Monkey Trial
I wrote this October 7, 2005, as one of my first speeches for my speech and debate club. It is so short! I haven't worked on it much since then, ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: Hey! Not for horses. About me. Sort of.
Well, it was the first thing I thought of. I think it's a simile. Those use like or as. They make me smiley. *Bweek*. I think you'll find I'm a ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: Hey! Not for horses. About me. Sort of.
Areida, you are so annoying. Not really. *Gives you the Addie Avvie look*. I'll be active, Ari, very active. *Hops up and down really fast*. See? Yes, essays do rock, ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: "My theme" essay
idk...i was bored so i decided to post an essay i wrote a year ago This introduction makes your piece seem kind of common. This is because you sound like ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: Escape
This is a short composition, which I wrote when I was asked by my teacher to begin a composition with “There was darkness all around. I walked ahead two steps ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: untitled 2
Well this stinks. Kind of like my feet do. Just kidding. The beginning kind of confused me. But I'm just dumb like that. I thought she was dead at first, ...
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: Hey! Not for horses. About me. Sort of.
Thank you! You are all so kind. I'm not so much of a fiction writer as Ari, and I'm not really considering writing as a career. I usually stick to ...
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: On Lucid Dreaming
This was an interesting piece. It was sort of a how-to informative essay. Quite the conglomeration. From reading this, the overall mood that I got from this is kind of ...
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: Hey! Not for horses. About me. Sort of.
I'm supposed to type something. So says the wise and wonderful *coughcough* Ari. This is not a good day to join a site, because I am in a very sarcastic ...
Apr 4, 2006
