AddictionToFiction

Maimoona: No, I'm not Japanese, but I absolutely adore Japan. I guess I always have, because I wrote this before I completely fell in love with Japan. And I've never ...

I actually didn't come up with the words, i used the origins of the species' original language, if that makes sense. So, dryads were originally Greek, so all of the ...

lilymoore: thanks for the review. I corrected everything I could find, though the last line still tripped me up. I'm not sure how to get the point across without using ...

Lilicia: I'd been thinking over the realism of the story, and came to two conclusions. First, the plot wouldn't work very well if Nigha had a good sense of stranger-danger. ...

LauRux -- I'm glad you liked it so much, that makes my day! As for her name, it's pronounced exactly how it's spelled, Nigh-uh. And I'm going to be working ...

Hey Megsug, thanks for the review. Originally we were supposed to get peer-edits in class, so my editor read the whole thing, but only gave me two comments. I hadn't ...

WritingSpitfire - thanks for the comment, I went through and fixed those things in my saved version, so thanks for pointing that out :) brassnbridle - the reason the horse ...

Thanks you guys! thajaro : as to why they let the other contestants in in the first place, it was basically an open thing and the judges just narrowed it ...

Hey again. I'm here to give you a new review, since you changed it around and asked for one. Okay, after reading through yet again, here are just a few ...

Okay, thanks for the advice Sidd. I write in both first and third person, but I decide to try and do this one in first person. The first time I ...

Thanks for the advice guys! Sidd, I have a question for you. When you suggested the scene on the boat, you gave it to me as third person, which is ...

As I re-read it, I found a few more things. One MAJOR thing is this whole exchange right here: “Nisha, don’t do that!” she giggled. Nisha leaned against her mother. ...