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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Peace, Love, and California

    I'm doing this as I go, so maybe I'll get more done right! :) Coming here, you had a focus, like for me it was painting and sketching, but you ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Peace, Love, and California

    Hey again Carlito. Another review for you! :) Okay, here are a few things I've noticed. It was a strange feeling knowing you wouldn't be seeing any of your friends ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1

    I loved it! I only found a few mistakes, like when Marie said “But I must say you are a very weird. A very weird what? A very weird one? ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: 'Ello, Addict here!

    Thanks for the link Elinor, I think I've figured it out now! :) In answer to your questions, Selene, let me think... my inspiration comes from wacky dreams, and songs, ...

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Your Own Room Plate :)

    thanks, I love it! It's perfect for me! Thank you times infinity! :D

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A howl in darkness (Prologue)

    I liked it for the most part. In the beginning, I was really confused. I though Karishma and Nisha were humans. Then all of a sudden they were some kind ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook

    Well, I started YWS in December of '09, and thus far, I really enjoy it. So far I think I'm better at reviewing than actually writing. :P Everyone here has ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Your Own Room Plate :)

    I'd love one! Preferred Name to use: Harley Favourite Colours: dark blue, dark green, dark purple, dark brown Hobbies: writing, reading, listening to music, playing games, dreaming Favourite Books or ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: 'Ello, Addict here!

    Hey guys, I'm AddicitontoFiction. I've done a few reviews, but I'm still trying to figure out how to post my own stuff. It seems pretty much the same, so I ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Acrobat Team - temp title - ch.1

    Brace yourself, this could take a few minutes! I'm not usually into this kind of stuff, but this one was very interesting, so I have a lot to say. Hope ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: I've discoverd something kind of bad...

    I agree with all the previous reviewers, but unlike Jasmine, I think you have to lead your characters... at least at first. When first creating a character, they're timid and ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A lifeless secret - prologue

    I'm very confused! To say the least, it was interesting, but I was immensely confused throughout the entire thing. You have to use slightly more common words, words normal teens ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A land away from home

    Okay, it failed the first time I tried, so this will be less nit-picky, which can either be a good thing, or a bad thing. I'll sum this up in ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Hunter - Prologue: His Prey

    Besides everything Jenthura said, here's what I think: I'm a bit confused as to the plot/point of the story. Usually a prologue gives at least SOME explanation as to what ...

    Dec 2, 2009


Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers