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Re: Peace, Love, and California
I'm doing this as I go, so maybe I'll get more done right! :) Coming here, you had a focus, like for me it was painting and sketching, but you ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Peace, Love, and California
Hey again Carlito. Another review for you! :) Okay, here are a few things I've noticed. It was a strange feeling knowing you wouldn't be seeing any of your friends ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1
I loved it! I only found a few mistakes, like when Marie said “But I must say you are a very weird. A very weird what? A very weird one? ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: 'Ello, Addict here!
Thanks for the link Elinor, I think I've figured it out now! :) In answer to your questions, Selene, let me think... my inspiration comes from wacky dreams, and songs, ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Your Own Room Plate :)
thanks, I love it! It's perfect for me! Thank you times infinity! :D
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: A howl in darkness (Prologue)
I liked it for the most part. In the beginning, I was really confused. I though Karishma and Nisha were humans. Then all of a sudden they were some kind ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
Well, I started YWS in December of '09, and thus far, I really enjoy it. So far I think I'm better at reviewing than actually writing. :P Everyone here has ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Your Own Room Plate :)
I'd love one! Preferred Name to use: Harley Favourite Colours: dark blue, dark green, dark purple, dark brown Hobbies: writing, reading, listening to music, playing games, dreaming Favourite Books or ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: 'Ello, Addict here!
Hey guys, I'm AddicitontoFiction. I've done a few reviews, but I'm still trying to figure out how to post my own stuff. It seems pretty much the same, so I ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Acrobat Team - temp title - ch.1
Brace yourself, this could take a few minutes! I'm not usually into this kind of stuff, but this one was very interesting, so I have a lot to say. Hope ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: I've discoverd something kind of bad...
I agree with all the previous reviewers, but unlike Jasmine, I think you have to lead your characters... at least at first. When first creating a character, they're timid and ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: A lifeless secret - prologue
I'm very confused! To say the least, it was interesting, but I was immensely confused throughout the entire thing. You have to use slightly more common words, words normal teens ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: A land away from home
Okay, it failed the first time I tried, so this will be less nit-picky, which can either be a good thing, or a bad thing. I'll sum this up in ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: The Hunter - Prologue: His Prey
Besides everything Jenthura said, here's what I think: I'm a bit confused as to the plot/point of the story. Usually a prologue gives at least SOME explanation as to what ...
Dec 2, 2009
