AddictionToFiction

Calli Watching an Arc leave, I sighed. I'd been abandoned before, but I wasn't useless anymore. I had a job to do now, even though I no longer wanted to. ...

Hey forgottenfallen, welcome to YWS! So, shall we get down to business? Well, there is one problem absolutely anyone on here will point out: you need paragraphs! Don't cram it ...

Okay, thanks for the advice Sidd. I write in both first and third person, but I decide to try and do this one in first person. The first time I ...

I think you need an overall super-villain, because plants and animals seem trivial opponents, especially considering Ithycus Burns' power. But, it sounds interesting, so I'll give it a shot! :) ...

Thanks for the advice guys! Sidd, I have a question for you. When you suggested the scene on the boat, you gave it to me as third person, which is ...

As of right now, I have no prologue to this, because whatever I wrote just didn't fit. So, here's the first chapter of my first story to post on here. ...

Ha, yeah, I love poking fun at everything Twilight 8) But there's no drama, at least, not the city I'm in. Although, I guess I'm kinda glad about it; drama ...

Hey, I liked it. I only found one part hat I really didn't like: "I stayed huddled within the shelter of the tiny shelter," just doesn't make sense. I know ...

Haha, nice one JD. :lol: "Edwardkins"... *dies laughing* Ooh, don't forget sparkly! :P (I personally doubt Edward's a vampire. He sparkles, and he doesn't kill things, so he CAN'T be ...

I really liked this prologue, it's one of the better ones I've read! Although it's a tad short, there's only two things I have a problem with. For though we ...

I really loved this idea. On one hand, it's got a familiar feel, while on the other hand, it's definately unique in its own way. However, go back to where ...

As I re-read it, I found a few more things. One MAJOR thing is this whole exchange right here: “Nisha, don’t do that!” she giggled. Nisha leaned against her mother. ...

Haha, yeah, I live in a place with hot summers and icky winters, where any snow we get turns to ice. But we haven't gotten any yet, and I'm not ...

Thus far, I'm hooked! I love it! It's unique, WAY original, and totally captivating. I love your characters, and I think my favorite is The Pirate! :P There are only ...

Hey again, I'm back for another review. Hopefully I won't be too harsh. :) had gotten all over the castle Might sound better like 'had spread through the entire castle' ...