AddictionToFiction

if you haven't read the first part, this won't make much sense. If you have read the first part, please review it so I know how to make it better. ...

Hey Megsug, thanks for the review. Originally we were supposed to get peer-edits in class, so my editor read the whole thing, but only gave me two comments. I hadn't ...

I had to write this for a class in school, and I'm not quite happy with the review I got (only 2 comments on 12 pages), so I was hoping ...

Hey Smexay! Well, this piece was a tad confusing, but I still liked it -- especially the twist at the end! Frankly, I usually can't stand reading present-time stories, but ...

***Please help me to make this better! Don't just read it and leave no comment. No one reviewed my previous part, which made me less than thrilled... but after several ...

Just as a quick once-over, it was interesting. But it seems like you switch tenses throughout the paragraphs. It starts with past tense: I laid my newly bought pages on ...

Because I haven't figured out chapter breaks and whatnot, I've decided to overlap it just a little so it still makes sense :) “I’ve stopped reading his messages. Although, that ...

WritingSpitfire - thanks for the comment, I went through and fixed those things in my saved version, so thanks for pointing that out :) brassnbridle - the reason the horse ...

Dreamy-- Chella's a mutant, right? So no, don't bother deleting it. Just work around it. It happened a LOT in the old SB, so I say just keep going. Also, ...

*How many Saviors are there? Are they all in our group? Haven't heard from Coita's person (forgot the username, sorry whoever you are!) and... someone else I think.... So, how ...

Wow. That's virtually all I can come up with at the moment: wow. I really couldn't find anything wrong with it in the spelling section, and I was a little ...

Okay, a couple things. One, there is a prologue, but it's currently under construction because I'm writing this with a friend and she's taking forever, plus her parts need a ...

Hey Skins, I saw your story and thought I'd drop by for a review. So, down to business, shall we? Damien was sat in his high-chair, crying like usual. A ...

Thanks you guys! thajaro : as to why they let the other contestants in in the first place, it was basically an open thing and the judges just narrowed it ...

*RedBird, is Silversun coming back?* **also, I dunno if it was Calli or Coita Kaywiia mentioned, so until we get to a first-name basis, can we at least leave hints ...