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OOOOOoooo Shear! You have hit some very lovely points my dear and I will most definitely take into consideration the whole psychiatrist/psychologist age thing. The idea behind him being so ...

Thank you all for the marvelous comments!! I have never received such uplifting comments in quite some time, it makes me feel as if I am traveling on the right ...

Thank you so much, this is the best post I have ever gotten on this piece of work, I so appreciate it, you don't know how much, haha, because I ...

Thanks guys, your comments are very helpful. It's not set in ancient times, I use the term "Viking" losely, because the name Jensen is scandinavian, so yea, that will be ...

Thanks guys, I really appreciate it. I'll post more soon!! And abake, I don't mind that you were so critical, that's what I asked for right? Critique's. Thank you again.

Hi, yea I know it didn't make sense, because the first chapter I posted didn't have a title because I couldn't think of one, so go read the first chap ...

Thank you everyone! This is like the most positive feedback I have ever gotten from one of my stories it is most appreciative!! I thank you so much, I will ...

This just keeps getting better and better, it's so original! I can't wait to hear more about the bad guy, keep it up! This is my favorite story on this ...

I absolutely love this! just love, love, love!! I haven't found a single thing wrong with any of the chapters, it has everything I want in a book, and more. ...

I loved it! It was delightful, how you brought Peter Pan and Alice in Wonderland, it was so nice, such a nice poem. I do have to admit that the ...

Thanks guys so much! I never gotten this much positive feedback from a story of mine ever! Thank you for pointing out my errors, I know my grammar sucks badly, ...

Oh! I love, love, loved this!! The sunlight idea, was brilliant. Sounds like something I would do myself. This story in its self is so innocent, and pure, it was ...

Ahh...I totally got it now, thanks =) makes perfect sense! You know I sometimes feel sorry for Jazz, alot is thrust on him, poor guy.

Yea, those alterations sound good. One question, and you might have explained this in the other six posts, but, why is Edward so angry and mean towards Aimee, I mean ...

What I meant was, I didn't like seeing them so bent outta shape over this girl that suddenly appeared, it was likt at times that Carlisle and Esme loved Aimee ...