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Ahh...I totally got it now, thanks =) makes perfect sense! You know I sometimes feel sorry for Jazz, alot is thrust on him, poor guy.

Yea, those alterations sound good. One question, and you might have explained this in the other six posts, but, why is Edward so angry and mean towards Aimee, I mean ...

Ok, I really don't know how this will pan out, it sorta just came to me one night, I didn't describe my characters as much because I have been told ...

Oh this was so refreshing! Who would have though that boxing could be this entertaining to read? I watched it, and was nearly bored to tears, but this my friend ...

This was cool, can't wait to see what happens next, totally wonders why April couldn't hear his thoughts when he had caught her, makes me think.."Ooo! What kinda characters will ...

This was good, interesting, but good. To be honest, I didn't get why this was called "Tarzan Boy" did you just pick the name out of a hat or what? ...

This was very cute, I enjoyed it. Most everything has been said, you get in trouble for not describing your characters enough and I get in trouble for over describing ...

What I meant was, I didn't like seeing them so bent outta shape over this girl that suddenly appeared, it was likt at times that Carlisle and Esme loved Aimee ...

This was wonderfully cute, made me remember myself being put on a leash in big crowds, only I think the leash was actually for kids...other then my random out burst ...

“I think she's coming around.” I heard someone whisper. “Is she alright?” another one asked. “She did hit her head pretty hard, I think the floor cracked.” “She'll be fine, ...

This was interesting, a very different take on Twlight. I like that you made this so different, that you made it your own. But, it was too bitter.

This was GREAT! I loved finding out what would have happened if Bella never married Edward, I can't believe she ended up with Mike, it must have been a pity ...

Lot's of crying, I thought vampires couldn't cry. In the end I thought the whole seven parts were ok, part one was my favorite. The rest just went by too ...

This was wonderful, I love Twilight, and to read something totally different, was refreshing, I loved the idea of Edward having a sister, finally another girl in his life to ...

This was wonderful, I love Twilight, and to read something totally different, was refreshing, I loved the idea of Edward having a sister, finally another girl in his life to ...