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Hey, I liked this very much! But I don't get where everyone is getting the name Jacob, is it in the other two chapters? Because I haven't seen it here ...

So, at first I posted their break up, and now I'm posting their before, doesn't really make sense. Please be nice, my only wish. Andre jumped out of his rental ...

This was mighty nice, loved how you kept to the same dialogue the pirates used. A woman for a captain! I love that idea! I always thought there should be ...

I loved it! It was delightful, how you brought Peter Pan and Alice in Wonderland, it was so nice, such a nice poem. I do have to admit that the ...

Wow, that was really long, and as everyone else has told you that not many people want to read something that long, I've done it before and didn't get that ...

Aw, wow, so sad! I really felt what Kate was feeling, good name by the way. She's on the verge of getting on her knees and begging for him to ...

Thanks guys so much! I never gotten this much positive feedback from a story of mine ever! Thank you for pointing out my errors, I know my grammar sucks badly, ...

Ashlee Donovan caught Andre by his sleeve, she was huffing and puffing like she had just finished running a race. “Oh Andre!” she gasped trying to catch her breath. “I'm ...

Aw, poor thing, I know how she feels. It sucks sitting around while everyone else and their mother hook up. But anyways I liked it, alot. You say your not ...

Hey! Ok, I still really like the name Levi, that's a total plus. I like the story so far, the whole Keepers, thing is very different, in a good way. ...

Oh! I love, love, loved this!! The sunlight idea, was brilliant. Sounds like something I would do myself. This story in its self is so innocent, and pure, it was ...

This was good, everything was pretty much said. I like the suspense, I'm one for a book that makes me think "Dun dun Duuun!" you know those notes or keys, ...

OK, so I've posted some of Glimmer before, and you guys left me good comments and critiques and I believe I've fixed them, and now here's the entire first and ...

Lovely. Is it going to be a horror story? If so it sounds like a good scary one. OK, I want to know what happens to the house, does anyone ...

Whoa...man, just whoa. In a good way, though. I did think that this was going to be another vampire story, and the thought continued with, 'Seriously, more vampires?' But as ...