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OK this is like the third part in my vampire novella, it's not a chapter but a part, please comment, I would really really appreciate it. Thanks! I left the ...

It's good, but all three chapters are so short, and in all reality I don't know anything really about Ally. Why does she dislike everyone around her? Your writing is ...

[u]Ok guys, here's the second part of my vampire romance, I know it starts out slow, but bare with me it gets better, critique's are always welcome thanks! [/u] Taking ...

Oh my word, this is adorable!! My favorite chapter to date, I love the sparks that fly between them, it's perfect! And Jean, Ooo, he's so bad, but in a ...

I love it, I don't know why everyone else is saying such negative things, vampire stories are the IT thing now, even I myself have stuck my finger in that ...

Wow, this is really good! It kinda reminds me of this one Barbara Cartland book, which is a good thing because she is an excellent writer. Though I do have ...

Thanks guys, I really appreciate it. I'll post more soon!! And abake, I don't mind that you were so critical, that's what I asked for right? Critique's. Thank you again.

OK, this is my first chapter of my vampire romance story, I've gotten great feed back from my other posts on this and I hope you guys will grant me ...

I love this! Seriously, I love the idea of the prince being a bad ass, pardon my French, it's a cute idea. Now, it looks like everyone has given you ...

I like it! The first paragraph in italics, is rough and hard in a good way. I like how it's right in your face with the romance part. Now, I ...

Hi, yea I know it didn't make sense, because the first chapter I posted didn't have a title because I couldn't think of one, so go read the first chap ...

OK! First, I will tell you all why I have finally after much frustration picked the title for this book, 'La Luna e Bella' it's Italian for The moon is ...

Wow, this was sad, it was good but so sad. Ha, that's all I can say really, that it was good but it was sad, sad as in what happened ...

Hey Pink! Well you always deliver, and for that I am thankful. I love the idea of a love interest in the kitchen, I love cooking myself. I hate to ...

Thank you everyone! This is like the most positive feedback I have ever gotten from one of my stories it is most appreciative!! I thank you so much, I will ...