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Re: The Romanov Chap 1
Ok, here's the first chapter of The Romanov, and I hope it makes more sense, I know the prologue was a little difficult to understand, but hopefully this passage will ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: The Neighbor-Intro
Hey there Deliliah, Haha, makes me think of that song by the Plain White T's. Let's get down to business shall we? Ok, now I'm going to be frank, your ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: -deleted-
Hey Pink, Once again, your writing has perplexed me in the best way possible. You are an amazing writer young lady, superb! But, I have to be honest, otherwise what ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [11]
I loved it! Please tell me that you continuing on with Liliah and Luke? Please! Its so beautiful, and I can't wait to read more, although I did wonder what ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Romanov (Prologue)
Thanks guys, your comments are very helpful. It's not set in ancient times, I use the term "Viking" losely, because the name Jensen is scandinavian, so yea, that will be ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: The Romanov (Prologue)
Ok, so the last thing I posted on this site was in April, how sad is that? Ok, about The Romanov, the title is a little iffy, I like it ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [10]
Hey Pink, Like always you have delivered, I have read every single chapter\part and I love it, you are beautifully talented, please don't ever quit. Like I said, I liked ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Mike Fyler
ok, I'm sorry I don't want to be mean, because I would never want anyone to bash my writing, and I promise I will not do that. But this is ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: The Day life began and Died (Prologue)
Hey guys, I really haven't written anything in a while, and this just sorta came to me ya know? SO! I hope you like it, it's a work in progress. ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Bonded By Blood A True Blood FanFic
This is good, I want more! I love love love!! True Blood!! Eric is my favorite, Godric is pretty nice too, wish they had him in more episodes. Oh well, ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: The Black Widow
This is just a prologue to some mystery book I'm thinking of working on, let me know what you think! Thanks! She stands before you, alone but surrounded. Her arms ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Fairytale: A love story... (chapter Two)
Whoa whoa, proposing already? I know he's confused since he's from another world, but proposing is a little quick, and her reaction should be something like wanting to send him ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (2) (edited)
OK first thing, I got this trait from my mom, it's called GuessingWhatsGoingTOHappenNextItis It's a terrible disease, but what I'm tryin to say is, I kinda figured out that the ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (edited)
Awww, so cute! I love it! Totally what I'm looking for in a romance. They meet, there's sparks, words are shared and then departure, each one thinking of the other. ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Unknown Incidence (1)
I would have to agree with everyone else, this has great potential, but if this is the first chapter its bland, I'm sorry but it is. Practically everyone has told ...
May 20, 2010
