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Ok, so i think I fixed everything, that needed to be fixed, thank for your comments,here is the new revised Glimmer with some added parts! I always knew I was ...

Oh so sad! I agree with Night Owl, there is 't enough detail. But it's sad, why do love stories have to be so sad? It's good don't get me ...

This was really sad, but in a good way because it tells people to never give up hope. Like the old saying 'Never give up, never surrender!' I liked it ...

Hey, this was good, very good. It did remind me of I am Legend, but from a girl's point of view. But, what I want to know, is Cara the ...

I liked it, it's different. But I kinda agree with Snoink, show me don't tell me. That's my critque to you, but really good job.

I thought it was good, just got kinda tired of words repeating themselves. But other then that it was very creative, and enjoying. =)

This is my attempt at a murder mystery, be nit-picky, but not mean. Please and thank you! Working late that night, for a specific reason, Genevieve d'Allemagne was preparing herself ...

I really enjoyed this, I would totally pick it up off the shelf of a book store, but what I want to know is "why?" Why is she getting all ...

Here are some names I pulled up over the net. Lulu Cordelia Dixie Celeste Portia Audrey Lily Camille Hope you find something to your liking, I know how hard it ...

Over 300 and that's not even counting the one's outside my room, let's just say that i have an addiction. Heh... a good one at that though.

This was good, scary good, but that's ok because I like scary and different, which that's what this was scary and different. You should give yourself a pat on the ...

Thank you both, I am working on the things you said that needed to be fixed. I realize it doesn't sound like a "Fantasy" book yet. But I'll post something ...

This is the first chapter of a three part series, it starts off kinda slow, sorry. I always knew I was different, just how different never hit me until now. ...

I read all five chapters and thought them all good, I'm really glad that you brought some of the old remedies, on how to kill a vampire and the thing ...

Wow...this was sad. I wanted to cry afterwards. It was dark, and scary, and full of despair. I don't think I could ever survive soemthing like that, losing my family, ...