Addawen19

Hey guys! This is the first chapter of my assassin hit-man novel, I know it's kinda long and I apologize! I just didn't want to have to split it up! ...

Hey! I have to agree with everyone so far, your story has a lot of potential it just seems that you have so much running around in your head and ...

Carlito!! Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!! OH!!! Man!! I just love girls like that, she just totally ripped him a new one! Oh my dear you did her perfectly, and she didn't ...

Carlito darling, Very nice job, you got the angst just right! I don't mind the language at all, if it were me no matter what anyone else says, I wouldn't ...

Thank you all for the marvelous comments!! I have never received such uplifting comments in quite some time, it makes me feel as if I am traveling on the right ...

Hey Carlito, First off thank you for letting me know that the next couple of chapters for Mic Night was up. Again this is very good, very sweet and wholesome. ...

Prologue. It was then, that I first laid eyes on the carnal, exotic, creature before me and it may be my last. I raised my hands in innocence eyeing the ...

Hey Carlito! This was sooooo good!! I'm glad I finally found enough time to get my butt on here and start reviewing some things, and I'm especially glad I just ...

In my belief and in the way I write things, the name to me is almost as important with the plot, it has to seriously fit my character, like to ...

Hey Lux! I really enjoyed this except of Charlie and Logan, it had its fill of excitement and mystery. There were just a couple things that I really didn't get, ...

Hey Wicked, I'll be honest here, and I hope it's not brutal honesty, I don't mean to be, promise. This first chapter, is it a chapter? Kinda short. Well, like ...

Hey Guys, been a while since I've posted anything on here, but you know life, school all that jazz it really takes a toll on your writing, finally getting a ...

Hey guys, long time no has been a while hope everyone had a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year, this is my latest piece it's somewhat fantasy somewhat romance, ...

Hey Lauren, Quick review here, sorry getting kinda late where I am, and you know how good sleep is. I really liked how this has so far panned out, the ...

To start off, my name is Addawen, sup. I'm not the type of reader who will overly nitpick on your grammar and stuff, one: because I stink at it, two: ...