Adara

Thanks!(: I'll fix those errors and describe them more. Also that's so cool that you have a chinchilla! I'm saving my money up for one, they are so cute. How ...

***** I hope you like it, first story I done in a long[u]time. Next Chapters will come soon. Please tell me any suggestions, I know I didn't do it perfect. ...

I like chapter 1 it really got my attention. Most books I read takes a long time for me to actually get interested in. Not yours though, I'll read chapter ...

I really like the chemistry between Jackie and Thomas. Also the story sounded so well, like I was reading it out of A book from Barnes and Noble!

I want to read more such a good story so far. You should add more emotion on how she feels?

I really like this Poem.

Hi, I'm Adara I love to write and a few friends suggested this website. So I'm giving it a try. Ever since I was in 2nd grade I wrote stories ...