AdamBH

I look at the small child before me, dead before his time had come. He looks up at me, “What happened?” “You died.” I answer calmly. His brown eyes fill ...

So that’s a yes indefinitely A heartbeat, make it one, two and three You closed tired eyes And open them to my own uncertainty I love this stanza, it throws ...

Hi, I began to plan and write this novel a while back, and I have not got Chapter One and The prologue, which I just finished today. I am hoping ...

Thinking knowledge it's a good thing is right, thinking you know more than anyone it's wrong, I say this because poor me 'Poor' seems to undermine the tone of the ...

Everyone's eyes gleam and Reflect the colours of the Inside world. White are the streets, No flowers to cloud your cloudy breath That casts a spell on life. Here in ...

I don't understand exactly what this poem is about. Is he gay, and that upsets you because you love him? I did like the anger, and the conflics again I ...

I loved this. It's full of contradictions, which I think a lot of people can get confused about, but I believe contradictions mean just as much as things that make ...

I like this! I think it's like a new take on romance and I absolutely relate to the way she thinks and the Paris... ahhh XD. It's kind of like ...

I'll say what I say really often: more imagery and figurative language. However, I will also say wow! You captured something I really feel, especially recently. I am never the ...

Wow, I really loved this one! I think you could have perhaps included a bit more imagery or rhythm to make it more poemy, but you know what, sod that! ...

Grasp it tightly! Run your hand up and down the stem. Again and again, The blood will flow: The thorns will prick you, one by one, And you will bleed ...

Hi, I liked it overall, but I thought the emotions could have been stronger. How? Make it much, much slower; and describe more in detail. You could also use some ...

I thought it was a sweet poem but I thought it was rather spelled out and simple. You could have made it more complex in terms of imagery and figurative ...

I agree with the previous reviwer. I liked it a lot :D Also, remove the s in 'sees'. The subject is 'they' so you don't need to add an s ...

Oh my God! I have just posted a poem called 'just hope' and it appeared first on the list of zero comments, and your appeared second, and I think they ...