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Re: My angle in heaven
i clamber through the hole in the old wood fence. my oasis of calm. in here, beetween the meandering passageways and pink blossom trees, you can't hear the roaring of ...
Apr 27, 2005 -
Re: i dont have a title(help me out)
i think you should do maybe a prologue and describe what happened that night. it would quite effective if you did that part in the present tense, and then switched ...
Apr 27, 2005 -
Re: sadness
hmm... it wasn't really intended as non-fiction, but i see what you mean. thanks for the ponts guys!
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: sadness
When nothing else in the world matters, and all you can do is wait. wait for the worst you know is going to happen. Wondering if you will ever see ...
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: popularity
i think it's good! the improvments i had were pretty much covered by others. i do like the last line of your signature poem too though!!! fairy ;-P
Apr 20, 2005 -
Re: Warthog In A King Prawn Suit Is Alive
niteowl- thank you!
Apr 20, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust 11 - Nudith
that was really great! are you going to post a second part? i really want to know more! It was creepy, and Nudith reminded me slightly of that girl from ...
Apr 19, 2005 -
Re: Warthog In A King Prawn Suit Is Alive
Hey Warty! this Devil 62 from TYWC! i wondered where you'd gone. good to see you. you too Matt Bellamy! Fairy ;-P
Apr 19, 2005 -
Re: Hourglass
i thought it was very good. a little confusiong, but good...are you sure you're 11? fairy ;-P
Apr 19, 2005