Acid_Fairy

this might be just me but i didn't think that 'i feel as if someone is pouring anti-freeze into my veins' didn't really seem to fit-but apart from that there ...

i thought it was great! it's like the kind of thing i write so i could really connect to what you wrote! i really enjoyed it! please write more!

ok-im confused- i didn't know i posted this-um i think something moght have gone wrong-and what references to movies?

um...wasn't really sure where to put this-but i wondering if a few more people would critic some of my work? there are a few where only like one person has ...

errr....old one replybe flower or pink flower???

fool is right-only do it if you know 100% that it's with the right person and that YOU are ready. i guess it's kinda important-but no so much so that ...

i like it! alot! it was great-and that's putting it bluntly-is it like a greenday type song? you should like sooooo send it too them!

it's...different...but i liked it!

my parents have been divorced as long as i can remember. it's tough. you just have to grit you're teeth and bear it. one thing that i haven't ever really ...

***this kind of goes back in time until before the last post-just in case you get confused*** *~~~~* I threw rocks into the sea. counting the ripples from around the ...

i got a bit mixed up- when they are on the phone- they are actaully talking about their dad, but i put mum in there by mistake.

i wrote another story-but the other chapters were about other characters-and it wasn't so good-ive writena second part i'll post soon.

Things in life are precious. We are preciouse to ourselves, people close to us like family and friends. Our hearts. Our lives. There are things we think are preciouse. the ...

very good! i thought it was great! really...i dunno...inspiratinal? can't find the right word but you get the picture!

not sre whether i liked this or not....i'm not sure about the 'crick crack the twigs sanp' it might just be me but it didn't sound right.