AceOfSpades

I absolutely loved this poem. The thought was wonderful and the rhythm was almost hypnotic. I think the beginning was great and it definitely sucked me in, at first I ...

This is an absolutely lovely poem. It had a clear message, great rhyming scheme and rhythm. not much else to say about that. -Ace

I have to say this seems close to promising and I slightly agree with seana, it seems to be about the talking, you might want to get a bit more ...

I love the idea and the way it's written. Very addictive. There's one thing I want to say. The format is slightly off. What I mean is that there should ...