Abyss

What you've got here is a beautiful poem, truly. It somehow felt like you just took the whole thing of the top whilst sitting under a tree. Good work. Keep ...

I'm drawn to love the diabolic elegance of this poem, it truly is gripping through its velvety smooth grasp. although im rather perplexed as to what role the girls had ...

Haha yeah I get that from most people...but with me its all about the depth really although I have been trying to learn how to make my writing commercial it ...

Love the tension intertwined with motherly love and trust. Gripping read from the start. Keep writing. Abyss.

Wow...That really did help me a great deal, I really must thank you for it so, thank you! I did rush the story as being impatient is just a part ...