Abyss

Greetings, I found your poem quite gripping, to the point where I found myself in a stagnant position of suspense. Your style of writing is quite admirable, I have to ...

Darkness prevailed. Cannons roared in the distance, Demons howled and the screams of men persisted. The dark clouds under the crescent moon watched, Helplessly, as countless arrows flew by into ...

This poem hold’s within it great power and depth. It’s often the small things in life that come of more value than the larger things. I personally like the way ...

Very interesting poem I must say. Allow me to share with you what I thought of its concept and the way you wrote it. “You’re here And I am too ...

What you've got here is a beautiful poem, truly. It somehow felt like you just took the whole thing of the top whilst sitting under a tree. Good work. Keep ...

The skies were scarlet entwined with black, Celestially illumined by a rising sun. The whispers of phantoms blew with the wind O’er the crashing waves of the blue ocean beneath ...

Since the first reviewer corrected your grammar and spelling mistakes, I am going to delve into the depth of this poem. Firstly I would just like to say that, anything ...

(Verse 1) The sun shines so bright with light soothing homes Our lungs bind the air as we smile through telephones Ladies speak in mellow tones, below faces of chrome ...

Wowzers...both the concept and tone of this story is absolutely brilliant in my opinion ;), although there were a few grammatical errors etc. Copper really is a girl who embraces ...

That is what I would like to call a mini candy bar poem with a touch of darkness. It may look short and choppy on the surface but, I am ...

On a lonesome planet robbed of life, where the mist swayed thick and little was seen—Abaddon treaded. He walked, propelled by his eager will to find his father’s shield, once ...

Hi there! Lets begin shall we. Smiling, you toyed with my heart- Now- like a toy- it’s broken. Don’t pretend you’re sorry, You only deceive yourself. The metaphor you used ...

Hey there! you've just sucessfully depressed me haha its winter down here and I am freezing! Although my abstract form was warmed immensely as I was captured, within the atmosphere ...

Far beyond; past many stars and planets, quasars and black holes—rested a floating city. Built purely from dark hardened liqourice, plastered with white material of an unknown kind. Governed by ...

The silence was awkward and so was the tension. Pandora and her father Jeff hadn’t uttered a word since they had departed from their beloved home, that now was only ...