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Re: Amelia Everline
Hey, this was cute. its REALLY confuseing.....and short. kkeep working on it, but be more descriptive
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight (Part Two)
Ok no offence, but IM offended. tht kinda screws everything. i am a HUGE fan of twilight and that kinda made my feelings hurt. i think that the movie is ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chronicles of Syn: Sins of Prologues.
Hmmm this sounds really cool. and no offense, it sounds like the opening of a video game. I acctually like the fact that it sounds like that, but try to ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: The Life and Times of Miss Aurora Beaumont (and friends)
Hey, i like you story but.... there are just a few things i dislike. Anyway, where was I? Oh, yes,[/u] Cindy. Cindy works for our school magazine, the Sneaky Slipper, ...
Mar 20, 2008 -
Re: The Source of Power
hey this sounds really cool!! i have a suggestion, though. Not one to leave anything to chance, he summoned the essence of light and molded the light of the lantern ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
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Please dont read!! this is now JUNK!! :piratedthread:
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: The Broken -- Chapter One
hey!! i really like your story!!! its a little strange but good. I personally liked your descriptions, while sombody said otherwise. keep it up, thought i should say that you ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
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lol just if your wondering, i kno its a little fast and not verry descriptive, but its supposed to be that way, everything will be alot difrent in later chapters.
Mar 19, 2008 -
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Please dont read!! this is now JUNK!! :piratedthread:
Mar 19, 2008
